tight feelings
choking you;
exhausting the very life
once cherished
been granted
with nothing more
than memories
a part of you
snatched away
by an unknown entity
gripping on your heartstrings
to end the innocence
and begin the visciousness
but somewhere
in the far distance,
a lone heron stands
waiting for people
to finish their picnic
so he can scrap up
the last morsels
looking at him,
your life
doesn't seem
so alone anymore
push through the wilderness
dance away the sorrow
sing a merry tune
to notes of yesteryear
do anything
C
R
A
Z
Y
just to prove
life's still
worth living
A contest entry
- *** UNCOVER MY FEELINGS *** by Rebekah-Ann.
500 points, ended April 2, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was very very very well done! Thank you so much!!
I loved how I could feel what you write and also the ending was so uplifting! Thank you very much for entering my contest!
Becks
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