hot, dry, sunny, day
it is nature's way
lizards, cacti, and foxes too
pain, ongoing, never ending,
thirst, craving you
Author notes
picture promt
A contest entry
- Take A Walk by misticmoonlite.
460 points, ended March 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Breathtaking, this was so creative, i really liked how this went together so well. It put a vivd picture in my mind, these things you bring to a point, they are all that you must like, therefore bringing yourself to crave the one you undoubtfully love.
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oh the desert will tell on us for sure,it is beautiful in its own right, but be safe out there lol...thank you for a nice entry, good luck, Moons
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Oh, now I love this! Great wording, great images. You did a fantastic job!
best wishes in the contest.
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