As I wander
the mother trees protect me
trapping warmth from
the volcanic sunset
reflecting through
raining diamonds.
I stop, realizing
I can't
leave.
A contest entry
- Take A Walk by misticmoonlite.
460 points, ended March 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very creative, a true tale of what the natural can do to one. It is a beautiful place beyond the walls we are so familiarly trapped within, to truly capture its beauty you must only look and not reason with the wind...As you said reflecting thru raining diamonds, To stop and realize you can not leave.
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oh this is different ,as nature does seem to sparkle like diamonds good entry here, thank you and good luck..Moons
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A nicely written piece of poetry. I think you did a great job. Good luck in the contest. Hope you do well.
Kelli
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