Deserts could never dessicate desires,
nor mountains become insurmountable,
nor oceans dissolve,
my quest to reach you,
in your moments of need.
A contest entry
- Take A Walk by misticmoonlite.
460 points, ended March 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow that wa truly deep. Love is an amazing thing, it is something that i truly hope all feel one day. To ber held in the arms of another, not just the grasp, but the emotion, the star struck feeling and need to be there. It is truly great, and tho love can be a heart breaker, it can also help to accomplish great dreams and goals.
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A beautifully written piece of poetry. Better than a traditional love poem. I hope it does well in the contest.
Kelli -
oh how lovely those steps took to go to a friend in need, I like this entry as well as the details, speaks volumes in words, thank you and good luck...Moons
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