There is no place on earth
as beautiful
as the love
in one’s own heart.
Author notes
picture prompt
Guess I just took a walk into the heart on this one. Couldn't do the photo justice with just a few words.
Word limit: 15
A contest entry
- Take A Walk by misticmoonlite.
460 points, ended March 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A beautiful heart felt piece. You have managed to say so much in so few words. Wise words indeed hunni. Superbly penned
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Thank you LadyD! I am pleased you enjoyed this.
blessings
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Sincere.
Very sincere and heartfelt, aboomer, a warm and loving write,
well done and good luck,
Alex.
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Thank you so much 'Floorboards' for reading, the lovely comment and clappies.
I didn't place.....think I stepped TOO far out of the box....lol
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How true this is. Our hearts carry us thru our days, and even tho it may be filled with unpleasant things, it is the soul provider, to all fatal and non fatal consequences. The carrier of our burdens, shames, hopes and dreams.
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Thank you so much 'only1love4ever' for reading and the lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
blessings
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Confident.
To love ones heart is to love thyself.
Perfect.
Blessed Be
Allura
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Thank you so much 'Allura' for reading, the nice comment and clappie. I am pleased that you liked this.
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I think this is very pretty you have did a great job have a nice day
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Thank you so much Genna for your lovely comment and applause. I am glad you liked this. I think if someone doesn't have love/beauty in their heart, they can't see the love/beauty around them.
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Well that's just stunning!! Such beautiful and profoundly true words!
Lovely hun!
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Thank you so much 'kiwi..' for your wonderful comment and applause. I am pleased that you enjoyed this short write.
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beautiful words - its only by feeling the love that it grows and we grow with it
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Thank you so much 'jackysunshine' for reading, your lovely comment and the applause.
If we don't have the beauty/love in our own hearts, we won't see the beauty/love around us.
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This is beautiful you have done a nice job with this piece thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest best wishes and much love
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Thank you so much 'Starz' for the lovely comment and applause. I am so pleased you liked this.
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good luck on the contest, im not sure if i can do this one, keep writing, -Amy
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Thank you so much 'amyrowsell' for reading, commenting and the applause. I appreciate it.
Why can't you do this one???
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This is absolutely beautiful......What a heart warming write....amazed at this...and the message it portrays, well done indeed, wish I could applause more..
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Thanks Rob for such a wonderful comment. I wish I could have written some beautiful lines on that picture itself, but these are the thoughts that I felt. I am so pleased that you really liked this.
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This is profound...so very, very true! Well spoken!
Best to you in the contest!
Az
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Thank you so much Az! It's not what I would have liked to 'appear' in my mind on that pic, but it's what I felt. Glad you liked this.
blessings
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I love your whispering fifteen words. They read so softly. I think you did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you 'Kelli Marie' for reading and your nice comment. It was a beautiful picture, but these were my thoughts.
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this is a very pretty and heart warming poem for this contest, thank you for the entry, good luck as always...
Moons
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Thank you 'Moons'....I loved that picture, but really couldn't do it justice, but then thought you really can't do natural beauty justice if it doesn't come from within yourself anyways.
blessings.
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