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Nature's Way

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 Graphic from MoonsShadow contest.  

 

 

Doors to wilderness

belong to loneliness

 

as I walk along Nature's way,

absorb heat this bright day,

 

hard gravel high;

tissuey sky.

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • frownsnfreckles
    February 28, 2008

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    A tissue absorbs moisture, cold and tears.
    This wilderness seems to have been dried of all three.
    Good luck in the contest
    The words absorb the essence of the picture.


  • Lady Altheia
    February 28, 2008

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    Tissuey sky? I never heard clouds described like that before. This road looks like it goes on forever. Good luck in the contest.

  • lostskylark
    February 28, 2008
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    wow. this is an automatic favorite of mine.
    supurbly written if you ask me.


  • Kelli Marie
    February 28, 2008

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    I like this piece very much. It has great depth. A well crafted piece of poetry. "tssuey"? Tissuey I am sure. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    ahhh, what a lovely poem of expressing natures path of beauty, nice entry here , thank you for taking the time to enter, and as always good luck...
    Moons

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