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Explicit

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Tingling flames burning
sensually heated.
Scrumptiously aroused
passion combustible.

Raw flesh unclothed

lustfully waiting

erotic sensations alive.

Captivating the whole body

as the orgasm becomes

whole.

Author notes

calling all sensual lovers
I have never wrote anything like this before

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • Abe 1
    March 3, 2008
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    gd 1
    luv de heat & de sexy feelin u ave shown
    leadin to the bang !
    thanx for your entry
    abe


  • poppa
    February 29, 2008

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    Great effort for your first attempt at writing something like this...sensual and hot....typo orgasim has no "i" , in your AN's the correct tense is "written" ....great write all the same


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 28, 2008
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    Excellent--Well written & Versed--Best of luck in the contest!!


  • jcat gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    DAMN!!! This was HOT AS HELL!!! You did an amazing job with the prompt, especially considering you have never wrote anything like this before...You nailed it!! Well done and best of luck in the contest

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