In the brevity of your slight backwards glance
I wander into your orgasmic eyes
Silk gown floats from your shoulders
Passes with a breath, across goddess like form
Your curves sway with temptation
Flowing between the sheets so innocently
The shadow of a haughty grin adorns your face
Silhouette of natures geographical masterpiece
Lies covered and pulsing for my arrival
Before time contemplates moving
I traverse the span that divides us
You’ve stolen my will with your siren call
I taste your ambrosia lips, instant addiction
As waves to shore you melt into me
With the elegance of a breeze we intertwine
Heaven’s jealousy gleams as we conjoin
In our sultry mid-day dance
A contest entry
- A Lovers Question by DrkPoet.
450 points, ended March 12, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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THIS IS YET ANOTHER BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN POEM FROM YOU. I LOVE IT AND I WOULD CHANGE ABSOLUTELY NOTHING.
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Beautifully penned! I hardly ever write that it doesn't rhyme and I'm in awe of those that can do it and make it sound good, which you certainly did here. Thanks for entering.
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Interesting, and I liked it.
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This should be receiving a GOLD trophy from someone's contest my friend! Why is it not? The metaphors, word choices, and flow were all well thought out. You did a fantabulous job on penning this, but then, why should I be surprised? LOL. And you say you need MY help in penning metaphors? I think not!
Thanks for sharing with the group more of your lovely craft and style.
Keep penning!
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The day we stop needing help is the day we meet the reaper.
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MMMMMMMM SOUNDS LIKE SOMEONE WAS WELL INSPIRED I DO LIKE THE TOUNGUE AND CHEEK OF IT ALL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFULL AND YOU ARE A GREAT TALENT
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