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Forged fate




Jealousy's sulphur tints
spit whispers of unholy venoms;
Carbon creeping poisoned souls,
tongue twirling in acerbic froth.



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17 words quickie: "beyond breeding lies"

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  • Naridill gold member
    March 2, 2008
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    Eerie and brutal but light wording.
    Thanks for entering,