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An effort




Love, if I could, cling to your arm,
would like to guide the way as wished,
of hopes thousands, those eternal,
illuminates my day and night to wait.

To guide you, waiting with romance
in the setting sun, ever known,
fills with nostalgia, a big kiss of love,
leaves, guides you, in-spite of my muse.

We will see our shades, to eliminating a little
let's look at horizon beautiful, to get dark,
the putting sun when it came to climax,
allow to kiss my love, in embraces eternal.

In such a romance, to forget messiness
our embattled silhouettes of resplendence,
in love faints, to recognise whose conscious
wakes in eternal symphony of ecstasies.






Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Contest *** UNCOVER MY FEELINGS *** by Rebekah-Ann

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  • penman gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    Wonderful

    very incredible creation you have penned. A terrific entry for contest. best of luck.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    February 28, 2008

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    wow!!!
    I love this! You hid your name but I know your writing style Thanks you truely are an "Angel" I really appreaciate your poem and will print this now and keep with me all day!!!

    Lovies
    Bekcs

    PS. thank you love!!!