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Flu

Down with flu
that stays sevendays
leaves even if you want it.

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You will get ready soon

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  • Pollycheck
    February 28, 2008

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    Down with flu
    that stays sevendays
    leaves even if you want it.

    Thank you for entering my contest. I wish I would have been through with it in seven days.


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    great poem for the contest. The flu is never a good thing, but I suppose some people might want it to get out of school or something, ha ha. Anyway, all the best for the contest.


  • maa gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    do you mean that there are actually people who are attached to their flu ???
    either they are crazy or they are crazy ...
    your verse reminds me of a saying that goes : "if you have a flu, either go to the doctor or do nothing about it - in both cases it will last seven days"



    hai-choo !