Be cautiouse, my heart told me.
But my head was unconcerned.
I abolished my fear;
and jumped right in.
His voice so soothing,
and his thoughts were always right.
His genitality embraced me.
It seemed so right.
He became a crave, a desire if you will.
But for him, it was all bleak.
though I held strong,
I refused to let go of what seemed so right.
But then, he began to reveal the truth.
His intentions never pure,
and his dedication never mine.
I have never been so wrong in my life.
Author notes
My evil ex boyfriend... again...
A contest entry
- Painful Desires by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1000 points, ended March 6, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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good poem, though something ill point out is some spelling mistakes: cautiouse-cautious
genitality- gentilily ,other the that its a very good poem,
good luck in the contest,
love vamp xxxx
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nice job again. the whole poem was hella good and this is another favorite one of mine. so there is no fav. part its all good
keep it up
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