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Shattered Dream, Lost Hopes

Smudged handprints
Line the glass mirror
Of shattered dreams
Each ridge
In each finger tip
Represents one more lost hope

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  • Alive Again
    March 21, 2008
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    love it it's short and gets to the point


  • Luminescence
    February 27, 2008

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    Oh wow... I love the imagery that you have here... it great. Using the fingerprint as a metephore for each lost hope...

    Very nice.

    Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck,
    ~lumin