like a blanket
death covers me
with its eternal pleasure
Author notes
Prompt~ "I am painless and cruel, short and endless. What am I?"
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended February 27, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything that is funny,or dark and visually appealing by Alive Again.
550 points, ended April 11, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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love it exactally wut i was looking for
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Oh wow... This actually makes sense... hehehe
great job!
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Oh I love this take on hte prompt also tha k you for taking the time to enter best wishes and much love always
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Interesting take of the prompt I like it Good luck with your poem oin the contest. Redwing Spirit
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