I can see her
As beautiful as god made them
Cradled in my arms
With tears in my eyes
And joy in my heart
Knowing
That in all the areas of my life
I had done worst
She was where I had finally
Done my best
Relief finally after waiting
So very long
My little angel
My little girl
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To my future daughter
Whom I cant wait
To one day meet.
Author notes
OPTION 3: -http://yanachan.deviantart.com/art/Innocence-78423856
A contest entry
- Options for free verse writers...come on in by Randomly Beautiful.
300 points, ended March 2, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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aww...this poem is amazing. and not just in the aspect of it being written well..but the message behind it which is more important dont ya think? honestly ive never read a poem that was so full of love for a child..and an unborn one if that. and it kind of makes me sad..awesome job =]]
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Congratulations and thanks so much for your entry. :f
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I actually wrote a piece like this called Eva, Darling about my little girl who I have yet to meet. I dream about her often... it's a wonderful feeling.
You really wrote with so much warmth and beauty in this... I can tell how much you yearn to meet her. Likewise. 
Well good luck with the contest... and with meeting your daughter!
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Please reread the rules. Thank you.
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