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You and Me

You say you adore me
Then completely ignore me
You've always kept me holding on
But we aren't even moving along

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  • ForeverNightMusic
    March 1, 2008
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    cute
    :]


  • sweetnsassy0888
    February 28, 2008
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    i can relate to this, i know how you feel. Love your writing, keep up the good work.


  • e m i l y
    February 28, 2008

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    A bit of punctuation is needed,
    but overall this is a cute poem.
    I have to say that I like
    the first two lines.

    Boys are very contradicting,
    aren't they? Good luck!