she scars tell a story,
about a girl who once turned cold,
she no longer cared about life or love,
no longer had fatih in anything up above.
once so strong but now she could only fall,
till one day she just lost it all.
she took the pills and brought out her knife,
in an attempt to save herself she tried to end her life.
everyone was hurt by what she tried to do,
but after she recoverd they saw something new,
there was a smile on her face where her tears used to be,
a light in her eyes everyone could see,
better then ever she was ready to start again,
for the first time in her life she was her own friend.
held prisoner in her own mind and body,
she finially saved herself and now shes free.
Author notes
ok so i've battled with depression for many years now and im finially better. everything in this poem did happen and though it saddens me i got that low im glad i was able to recover. thank for reading!
Please tell me what you think
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I can relate to this poem. Im glad you are recovering and able to write and share with others. Keep writing!! Well done.
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aww thank you
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I'm sorry to hear of all the things that you had to go through. I myself do go into bouts of depression but never have I gotten to the state of this.
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thank you for commenting. i come and go into it. write now im doing good.
and your welcome for the silver. i loved your poem. it was really hard to decide which one should win.
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This is sad and dark, a very depressing place to be. It is very well written however. I think you did a good job.
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thankyou so much for commenting. it was deffinitly a sad place and one i wish no one ever had to go to.
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