I love you o so
but you shot me down so low
I still love you but
when we talk you put me down
telling me I'm not the one for you
you break my heart
while i try to mend yours
you talk to me
but leave me crying
your laugh is always in my mind
taunting me
'cause I can't get you
'cause I love you
and you won't love me back
A contest entry
- Dark Pain...Make Me Cry and Feel the Pain by MusicMattnessLives.
375 points, ended March 3, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your lonely by darlintlc.
450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you feel when you read this
Comments
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Thanks for entering my contest...love can be very lonely when it's not returned.
good luck
darlintlc -
Aw..
Thats... sad. It makes me want to cry. I liked it though.
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wow. love when they don't love you back. good job. good luck and good write.
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