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Stand Back And Take That Moment

Sometimes the day will seem so restless
The mind will give you pain
The world around you seems so unkind
And you feel all you've done was wrong
Stand back look at this day
Look to what God has given
There is a beautiful blue sky above you
sometimes filled with magical formed clouds
stand back and listen to the birds sing
and the whispering of the wind, or the ocean
rushing to the shore.
Then  take one moment to raise your hands to heaven
and thank God for all you have been given
and the forgiveness for not being thankful
for all this beauty.
Ask God to forgive your selfishness
for only thinking of your bad day.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    THIS HELPS ME SO MUCH TODAY!!!!!

    I do see so much pain and sorrow everyday around me and it does get me so down and sad. Just reading your heartfelt words lifts me up and brightens my day. 's

  • Liquid memories
    February 28, 2008

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    wonderful

    we do need to be thankful for what he givews us, and stop comp,laining for what we do not have. how true the words yopu have penned here. thank you for sharing them


  • raggyann
    February 28, 2008
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    yes we are all guilty of this action at one time or another
    great poem and pretty pic too


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 28, 2008
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    you are correct we are consumed with our little problems,,thanks for the big picture xx peter