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This Single Rose

A single rose close to my heart.
Even though there is sadness from within.
I'm just as delicate as this flower,
A flower you chose to care for and give to me.
Why then? Oh please tell me why then?
Why have you chosen not to care for me?
The rose is beautiful and brings warmth to my heart,
But it cannot heal my broken soul.
You showed your love through this single rose,
But where are you now?
Gone and left me forgotten.
All I have left is this single rose,
Soon to wither and die. 

Just like you will wither from my mind,

And die from my soul.

 

Author notes

I used the 1st picture, I thought it was very beautiful and that's the first thing i thought of when i saw it. Hope it's good enough (I've been doing a bit poorly on my poetry writing.)

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  • Firequeen
    March 13, 2008

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    I think its beautiful.
    You took the picture and made it come to life.
    If this is writing poorly i'd love to see what good is..lol
    You did great
    Thank you for your entry
    Fire