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Thy Celestial Being of Perfection

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Enraptured and enriched
does your beauty make me see
the very vision of perfection
in which thy Celestial Goddess views me.

She endures the pain of such torment
from the goddess of the past
whilst she slowly opens her delicate heart
to the lovers who continue to become steadfast.

Enveloped in the curtain of your sorrows
your devine powers are instilled
my heart entwines with your soul
and my entire being is icily chilled.

I am blinded by your presence
gently carried in the sea of your heart
i float through the crashing waves
safe and full of the new start.

If love is something this goddess needs
she must have her wish
for her incredible sense of enchantment
makes my very core wallow like a dying fish.

I love thee, Celestial Goddess
your Pureness wholesome and true
please, thy Gorgeous Creature
let me bestow myself upon you.

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