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Memories of Moving on

It’s been 24 hours and nothing has changed, I’m still feeling the same
Everyone keeps saying, the pain will go away, that I’ll be okay
But I’m still waiting for darkness to fade
And I’m still missing your face

My heart feel so heavy, and in all of this time
to many tears I have cried
I want to let go, I’m not strong enough
And I can’t help but feels it’s my fault

{pre-chorus}
Never knew all the things I liked about you, until you went away
And I won’t forget you, you’re all that’s on my mine
And maybe one day I will really be fine

{chorus}
The sound of your voice, will always make me smile
And the memory of our kiss will forever be one
That will take me to a good place in my life
Even when the pain is to much to bare
The strength of your arms will always be missed
When I wake up alone
And blue eyes will hold me in trance
When I feel cold

{verse2}
It’s been 6 months and time has been harsh, and life has been hard
I keep thinking I’m moving on, but when I’m near you I feel you in my heart
And everyone keeps say your face will fade
And light will take away the dark

Sometimes I find myself happy again if only for a minute
Then I see your face again and my heart is filled with doubt
I want to believe that you will come back
But I’m glad that your gone
And I feel so sad that I feel this way
When I see the sadness in your eyes

{pre-chorus}
Never knew all the things I liked about you, until you went away
And I won’t forget you, your all that’s on my mine
And maybe one day I will really be fine

{chorus}
The sound of your voice, will always make me smile
And the memory of our kiss will forever be one
That will take me to a good place in my life
Even when the pain is to much to bare
The strength of your arms will always be missed
When I wake up alone
And blue eyes will hold me in trance
When I feel cold

{verse3}
It’s been 3 years since I’ve said goodbye, goodbye to all my pain
I will remember you and you'll always be in my heart
I will love you always, but time has moved on and I’m okay
She has been there to help me as I fell
And she is the one that took all my pain away
And now I’ve moved on 
I want forget you, your always on my mine
But things just aren’t  same


{chorus}
The sound of your voice, will always make me smile
And the memory of our kiss will forever be one
That will take me to a good place in my life
Even when the pain is to much to bare
The strength of your arms will always be missed
When I wake up alone
And blue eyes will hold me in trance
When I feel cold

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  • Knight Tigress
    July 19, 2008
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    Tonight was especially hard, I wanted to talk to you, but you weren't around, so I seeked comfort in this poem, that in some ways will always remind me of "Nick." It's been too long and I'm finding myself still aching for his face in my mind, his touch, his "blue eyes"-the first eyes I ever fell in love with. Tell me why does it hurt so bad, it feels like nothing before and it has been nearly a year. Why, why won't it go away, please tell me this, I know he was never good for me, but I still love him with all of my heart. It feels like a hot blade just piercing my stomach, your poetry speaks to me. Ofcourse, only understandable because we are in many ways going through the same things, your poem is sadly beautiful. You'll always be my best friend, I hate to think I am leaving you behind too, I'll miss you. Your laughter, your smile, your goofiness* and our seriouse talks. Your different and I like that about you, never change. Honestly I care about you, I just hope I never lose you too as a best friend, atleast as a friend. God bless, and keep writing, always be true to your heart! all I know is, I have to keep writing, I need to write, like a deep yearning inside that just knaws at me. When I feel as I do know, I will write.

  • Kuranai
    July 14, 2008
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    really awsome


  • vampirebloodlust
    April 24, 2008

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    amazing... this is a work of art. my lyrics aren't nearly as good as yours... i envy you and yet praise you. wonderful job.

  • Knight Tigress
    March 8, 2008

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    I love this poem, like I've told you many times before- you have such a way with words, and the way you express such raw emotion. I believe we all, as human beings can identify personally, we have all been hurt more than even this poem describes. Everytime I read this it brings me to tears remembering my past, it truly inspires me to open my heart up, as all of us should once in awhile and let all of the pain and regret that has welled up inside of us, to just flow free until we are exhausted with nothing left to lose- that is when the dawning of a new day begins for the healing of a soul that has been wounded this deeply. That is when we can look back and smile at such worn memories, without the tears of loneliness.


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    February 28, 2008

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    AAaaaawww this is such a sad song
    Is this about anyone? please tell me who,if so.......And like i said on my last commment

    I will always be by your side
    Wipe away the tears that you have cried
    Hold you in my rms till god breaks the embrace
    Cherish you and in my mind is always your face
    And when your is heavy and sad
    Know I'm here to listen
    Forevver and Always

    ~Silky~

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