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drowning sorrow

i have been here for hours thinking of how i will get up my mind is racing i wanna go home but I am stuck for now i lay here dreadfully waiting for someone to lift me up

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  • movedon
    May 20, 2008
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    "waiting for someone to life me up"

    superb!!

    Mylee


  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    March 4, 2008
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    I can relate...
    that's all I can "think" of to say...