Who the fuck are you
to pass judgment on me
You don't know me
So don't pretend to.
You know what you hear
The lies spewed and
whispered in your ears
Keep talking about things
you know nothing about
I don't know you but I pity you
force fed a handful of bullshit
By a master of deception
many have come before you
many will come after you
But this I tell you
get out before you get
chewed up, used up, then spit out
Keep pushing and pulling
Bend ,Break and crack till
I fall to your will
No fucking way
I'll see you in hell
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Do not judge me. by Serenity-words.
1800 points, ended April 19, 68 entries
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Comments
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this poem is amazing, so much anger, it is truely a gift to write this well, keep the ink flowing.
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This clearly shows your anger of those who judge. Great job and thank you for putting this into my contest
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Wow this is writhing
even in anger you're awesome
it's raw and real
I felt it!
Great work!
~Pastel
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thankl you for your wonderful comment pastel
means alot
Hugzz fire
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i know the feeling....
XD i love it! i like the part "I fall to your will/ no fucking way/ i'll see you in hell" that was great. unforunately i know this feeling all to well.... welcome to high school (and real life i'm told). nice poem over all!
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thank you
i think many can identify with this feeling.
Thank you again for your wonderful comment
Fire
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Wow!! now that's angry!
ooooh!!! Very Angry. I love poems like this! I wouldn't want to be the person who this poem was written about! Very good!! -
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thank you very much
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Oh my! This is so strong, like a rant you have successfully instilled your anger on the reader. Each line leads directly into the next and it finishes as strong as it starts.
Love,
Amera♥
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thank you very much amera
i appreciate your comments
fire
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There she goes again!!!
Hunny this is straight to the point,
NO she doesn't know you!! in truth very few here truly do. But obviously that doesn't stop them passing sentence. Dont worry hun, i have no doubt at all, she will end up at the bottom of his rotting shit pile just like all the others, then she'll realize what a very silly person she's been.
your amazing baby, and this is a fantastic write!
best way to vent the anger.
Ooooo nearly forgot the silly lipstick kisses so we can rub their faces in it,
can't possibly be because we're in love
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Thank you baby
just venting a bit
I love you
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