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Field of Snow


Given by my mother ~ a birthday gift for me
My very own diary with a small lock and key

And this message she had written on the first page
Good advice to follow no matter what your age

"Your life lies out before you
like a field of drifted snow
be careful how you tread it
for every step will show"

Your life really is like a trackless field of snow
If you follow others your steps will never show

Choose to make your own path and to yourself be true
Watch how steps are taken, others may follow you

That note in my diary remembered to this day
When she let go my hand to let me find my way






Author notes

artwork by prettyfreakjesper on my background
That short rhyming verse in quotation is something remembered from my mother's childhood days, I am sorry I don't know the author.

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  • Star Shine
    February 28, 2008

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    This is a great verse, with a lovely and wise rhyme embedded in it. What a great gift, that has obviously lasted a lifetime. Very nice rhyme, Thank you for this wonderful entry.


  • Amera gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    This is wonderful! I had to read it several times so I would remember it. Your mother was a wise woman and it rubbed off.

    Love,
    Amera♥