Night
No one prayed,
So that the night would pass quickly.
The stars
were only sparks
of the fire which devoured us.
Should that fire
Die out one day,
There would be nothing
Left in the sky
But dead stars,
Dead eyes.
Never
Shall I forget
That night, the first night
in camp,
which has turned
my life into one long night,
Seven times cursed
And seven times sealed.
Never
Shall I forget that smoke.
Never
Shall I forget
The little faces
Of the children, whose bodies
I saw turned into wreaths of smoke
beneath a silent blue sky.
Please tell me what you think
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i hate the holocaust with a passion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i applawed you to wright about something so dark, i could never do it.
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Me too! >.<
My friend Thomas wrote this, actually. ^.^ Thank you so much for your comment. <3
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the whole of my granny's family died in the holocaust. this poem really touched me and summed up my feelings of loss and confusion. there were so many possibilities that could have risen if they hadn't died. it makes me happy to see that someone cares.
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whoa.. >.<
thank you for your comment, it means alot =)
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this is really great. So sad..but this is so vivid it takes me there..
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thank you =)
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This is a great write Rayne, The Holocaust was a dreadful thing that happened to different races who people thought were inferior. I've taken a class on the Holocaust. People today still discriminate and still treat other races as scape goats and what not. I think it's messed up.
I hope that picture worked.
Anyways great poem I liked it. keep up the great work.
~*~Kayla Marie~*~
Angel Of Disguise
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thank you sooo much! >.<
((and it did ^.^))
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Amazing write my friend I love the imagery you have gone into with the piece
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thanks. it means a lot =D
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This is excellent...Can I suggest that it is the start to a muck more extended piece....this sounds like the beginning of a journey..I was taken in from the start and I wanted more....
Simon
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i'll tell my friend so. ^.^ thank you so much for your comment. it means alot.
-rayne
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wow.. very sad.. wow
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thanx
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Good Poem
A very sad poem much good imagery and flow it is sad
because it represents a true happening a continuing
barbaric and unprecedented genoside of a whole people
very well presented and narrated in this poem.
George(JUDMC)U.K. P.S could I offer you a poem of a
natural disaster "Tsunami" for your delectation
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thank you so much for your comment. it is much appreciated. i would love to read a poem on natural disaster. if you could msg it to me, or send me the link.. i'd love you forever!
thanks again
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BrokenWings
the poem concerned is called TSUNAMI on my patch its not a recent addition but should be easy to find if not there are over 120 odd other poems posted since christmas you might find one you like George (JUDMC)U.K.Best Wishes -
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yeah, i read it! i commented.. right? :/ sorry.. a bit slow today -.- anyway.. thanks for telling me bout it. its wicked good.
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Broken Wings....Fly
Thanks for kind comments on "Tsunami" have you read my "Katrina" yet I know you'l like it.Best Wishes George
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wow this is amazing and oddly makes me feel bad.
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thank you!
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Tell Thomas what a wonderful and amazing write. Very sad, this time in our history makes me so mad and angry!! Keep up the amazing writing
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i'll tell him so. thanks, aunti talk
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whoa!
very nice write. tell your friend that he is very talented.. well done!
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thanks
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very good!!
how come u didnt come to my b-day party?
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i didnt write this, my friend thomas did.. ^.^ he wanted me to put it up here..
i was sick
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