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Love

I don't deserve your love
the beauty in which i lay
your arms envelop my esscence
and i hope to remain this way.

Your eyes are like two oceans
deep and more calming than the sea
your smile burns my insides
how could you ever love someone like me?

I notice every movement
your own body happens to make
i notice every gesture
and put my heart at stake.

For you, i think its worth it
taking this delicate chance
my world was empty until you found me
and freed my soul to dance.

I love you more than myself
you're my everything, its true
I'd do anything to ease your pain
for my own is worse than blue.

I hope you know I love you,
theres nothing more to say
i can say a thousand words
but my expressions make the day.

"Til death to us part'...
that much is true:
for wherever you go;
my heart will follow too.

Please be as honest as possible, but not to the point where you're just cruel. Be fair, and thanks!

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  • evelynxxoo
    February 29, 2008
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    quite a real heart felt poem you put your heart and soul out there for all to view