At the end of the day
When the lights are turned off
All I want to do is say
How much you mean to me
When everything is over
My love for you stays
It doesn’t seem to want to go
Not even when everything is dark
It shines through everything
That is dark in my life
It gets brighter everyday
We are together and happy
I can’t close my eyes
Without seeing your eyes
I can’t smile my smile
Without thinking of yours
Everyday you say you love me
Everyday I fall more in love with you
Everyday you don’t realise
Everyday I look forward to the first message
I can’t live without you
You are my life no matter what
When you are asleep you are
When you are awake you are
You are the only person
Who owns my heart
And my world
You are my everything forever
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ooooo....in love!
Some one must be getting roses, chocolate & love poems! Fortunate one. :-) One piece of advise: watch your font colors. I can't see the links! The bckg. font is fine & matches the border nicely but the dark blue fades away into the dark of the night sky! I'd like to tighten up a few things for you in this nice piece & so I'm gonna copy since this is the easiest for me! Here we go:
At the end of the day
When the lights are off
All I want to say
Is how much you mean to me
When all's over
Love for you stays
It doesn’t go
Even when it's dark
Your love shines through everything
That's dark in my life
It gets brighter everyday
We're together and happy
Can’t close my eyes
Without seeing you
I can’t smile my smile
Without thinking of yours
Everyday you say you love me
Everyday I fall more in love
You don’t realize
How I look forward to your first word
Can’t live without you
You're my life no matter what
When you're asleep you are
When you're awake you are
You're the only person
Who owns my heart
And my world
You're my everything forever
Please tell me what you think
[Before I turn to drink!] LOL...I just couldn't pass on the joke & rhyme! I can see you're in the midst of a wonderful romance [or dreaming about one!] These are lovely sentiments & say it all. This is what love & passion are about! Good going friend! Love on....+
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Awww
this is adoreable! I really like this poem, i can tell you are in love and fallin in love everyday day. I can relate to this a lot. Keep up the amazin work!
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