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Lost Comfort

Emotions stiffen and freeze.
Wandering in the cold
Dark shoadows of solitude.
Crystals fall from weeping eyes;
Natures sweetest sorrow.
A chilling embrace
From an unseen friend brings
Back a lost comfort.
The soft whispers,
From amongst the leaves
Renews a friendship.
A seemingly forlorn path
Shines in warmth,
Below the morning star.

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  • Forlorn Dreams
    April 8, 2008
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    Excellant

    Awesome poem! You definitely have a gift of writing poetry. I am so proud of you! I love all of your poems!
    Love you Always and Forever!
    Mom


  • Rockstar Bob
    March 24, 2008

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    Hello, It's been forever since I've commented on your poetry that I decided to do it for old times sake.

    This is an excellent love poem. It has some of that tragedy that I love so much. Yet another Masterpiece of yours.


  • Woah Emily
    March 22, 2008

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    wow

    that was amazing.
    I loved the flow and the whole thing
    keep writing
    I look forward to reading more of your stuff :]
    keep writing


  • Megan Awesome
    March 1, 2008

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    This is beautiful. I love it. It's very deep and it very true. One of the top five for sure. I would tell you what my favorite part is ... if I could pick one out lol.
    Megan