Love
beautiful, strong
Rewarding, blessing, Inspiring
A special bond shared.
Unity
Author notes
Cinquain: line 1 (only one word) is your subject (usually a noun), line 2 is two words that describe your subject, line 3 is three words that relate (usally some type of action words) line 4 is four words that form a complete thought related to the subject and line 5 is only one word that is the synonym of the subject, or a word that "sums up" the subject.
A contest entry
- Short Ain't All Bad; Right? by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended April 28, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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What happened to the other one, I liked it
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I had to tweak it to make sure it fit the style. Can we enter two pieces? I will put the old one on too lol.
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A wee bit cynical aren't we? hahahaha thanks for your entry
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I was actually just editing it to better fit the style and it came out more...hopeful. Thanks!
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That pretty much sums it up... rather elloquently!
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Thanks I am glad it was enjoyed. I have tried in the past to toy with new styles, but I am really getting into it now. Thanks for reading and glad you liked it.
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very good 'take' on a cinquain great ending thanks for sharing regards zaj
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Thank zaj!! Glad you liked it. Gotta love those experimental pieces, lol
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