a tap
hot steam
running cold
Author notes
In England we run the hot tap to unblock noses...
A contest entry
- Aaaachooooo Haiku by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended March 11, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wonderfully described. And educational. Cool. You rock dude!
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I have to try this the next time I share my bed with a flu... Very brief, which adds to the clearness.

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a tap
hot steam
running cold
Thank you for entering my contest. I like the use of contrast in this haiku. Good job.



