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cancerous comments
slip from toxic tongues;
razored rulings.

 


[the words cut her throat.]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

"Some words can never be removed,
once they are uttered"
Image by oOfAilEdOo at deviantart.com

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    March 5, 2008
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    simply divine in the darkest sense of the word


  • legendd
    February 28, 2008
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    this is perfect....


  • Never Fall in Love
    February 27, 2008
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    woaho!

    ¬.¬


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 27, 2008
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    tis amazing and stunning and wow do i need to say more?


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 27, 2008
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    Bravo!

  • Nighttime angel
    February 27, 2008

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    this is amazing, wow.. this fits the prompt so well.. I am totally shocked.. great poem

    good luck

    kat


  • Kari gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    I felt my own throat cutting when I read this..very deep..and emotional..well done and the best of luck


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    February 27, 2008

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    HOLY CRAPOLA! Now YOU stop being perfect

    Well done, and good luck!

    Laura xxx


  • Valley Girl silver member
    February 27, 2008

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    This is a GREAT write! it fits the prompt very well! your picture is fantastic too! great job and good luck! Thanks for commenting on mine too.


  • Lady Eventide
    February 27, 2008
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    Ummmmm... wow. Speechless. Loved the word choice. Exceptional! Wow.

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