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Because of You

Because of You. I sometime feel like dying.
Because of You. I didnt even bother trying.
Should tried to get along on my own.
But that was the first time being alone.
I couldnt fathome what was being done.
It was your fault I couldnt even run.
Sometimes its my fault but most times its your.
Because of You I cant go through these opened doors.
Because of You. Her memory will never blur.
Because of You. I can even still hear Her.
I would kick your ass, but then Id break the mirror.

Alot of metaphorrs in thois one.

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  • LotusRyda
    May 15, 2008
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    great write


  • Darkside11
    February 27, 2008
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    so who's the one who scared you? good write though, keep on pennin bro


    • TheDeadMan
      February 28, 2008
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      Read the last line over and over again until you figure it out.