Blasphemous ink
stains hollow
hearts in
malevolence.
Seductive lies,
insincere apologies,
remain unforgiven.
stains hollow
hearts in
malevolence.
Seductive lies,
insincere apologies,
remain unforgiven.
Author notes
"Some words can never be removed once they are uttered."
Quote provided by Kat and Marky
Picture credit: "Lost Memories" by smxdeadlydesignz @ deviantART.
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A contest entry
- 10/13/15 Quickie Challenge by Nighttime angel.
650 points, ended February 27, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is really great... small but very powerful I love the words you use such as Blasphemous, and Malevolence!
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wow this is amazing and so powerful and it beautifully captures the prompt. ill give it gold hehe 
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you captured the prompt quite well. I like the last stanza, mainly the last line.
excellent job
good luck
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A good 13 words.
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Wow. With thirteen words, you really captured the gist of the quote. Excellent word choice. A winner for sure.
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This is so very true..some words can't be and they will always hunt you..very wonderful take on the prompt
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Stop being perfect. 
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Turning dalmatians pale is evil.
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Um, glad you think so...?
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This anon contest. Why you reply? I was only 75% sure it was you. lol
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Meh... I might not stick around anyway... I need a nap
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