are you hear little angel did you here my cry?
or did you just let drop down and die?
im here little angel im not letting go
im here to watch the little show
that you told me about what happens in the skies
the thing that happens before your life just dies
can you here me little angel im singing that song
and i want you to sing along
do you here me little angel i see you soar by
but why do you cry? im here arn't i? now i can fly
little angel is this heaven? is this love
is this how it feels to be above?
am i in a dream or is it in real life?
what do you mean im gone from earth? a knife?!
a man that street?
so thats the man now hes under our feet
he hurt me killed me tortured me so?
he though it was time to let me go?
why did he hurt me who is that man?
oh so he killied me then he ran
he was my dad?
why was he mad?
was i bad?
im sorry daddy i didnt mean to hurt you but now i made a friend
and im sorry i didn't mean to offend
daddy i have a little angel who loves me now
i would let u i would have allow
daddy i think you were mad but i would have been mad at me too
but in heaven daddy its not the same without you
Author notes
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i hope you all liked it!
A contest entry
- ~Silenced Angels~ GROUP CONTEST by Silenced Tears.
4500 points, ended March 10, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - COME AND SEE!YOU WON'T REGRET IT! by black hearted rebel.
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awwwwwww this is really sweet..not really what I was looking for but it made me go 'awwww'
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Beautifully expressed best of luck in the group contest.
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This is such a sad piece but a great write I wish you luck in the contest best wishes and much love always
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this is a beautully expressed piece but so very sad your words so strong with emotion and power.well done baby gurl love you
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wat i feel inside of me
i think it was sad
but i really liked it a lot
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