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Unconvential Metaphor

You are the meat
In my spaghetti sauce
The twinkie of a heart
That holds my cream
The snot
Inside my tissue
The toothpaste inside
The tube I squeeze

Author notes

I went for a funny cheesy approach versus a romantic one.

A contest entry

Too corny?

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  • soda27pop
    March 3, 2008

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    haha. i didnt know u would actually put our cheezy sayings in a poem and post them on the internet. lol.but in a way i'm glad that u did.


  • Flight of Dragons
    February 29, 2008

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    That's good. I was looking for cheezy poems. Well done this is a unique poem and in it's way is very likable.