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Oh sexual innuendos
With all their rotted condos
Rusty hinges that leave the door swinging
Calls forth the cleanly pressed linen
Who seeks that swinging door
And as they coincide she sheets wants more
Swinging door rocks it to her
And within their passionate transfer
All those sexual innuendos
And those rotted condos
Multiply into new homes
Where pressed linens and open doors have no thrones

Author notes

It's metaphorical about our society and how corrupt it can be: SEX SELLS AND THAT'S STUPID.

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  • Melissa Burns
    April 16, 2008

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    I love this and it's very true about what you wrote in your author's notes. It sells and it's very stupid, but we all watch anyway.