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[ cherry trees ]

cherry trees
as if they
yielded popcorn

A contest entry

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  • just mercedes gold member
    March 5, 2008
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    critical? personification. but this is lovely, thank you for your entry.


  • ScarletO gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    Now that is such a nice thoughtful image you have written. Very descriptive of nature.


  • DogFish silver member
    February 29, 2008
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    ...cute one,Pollycheck!


  • Kelli Marie
    February 27, 2008

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    A great haiku. I love the beautiful cherry tree, and the yummy taste of popcorn. I think you did a great job with this haiku as well. Very nice.
    Kelli