It was fate I said
Sure it was
It was all so perfect
Me and him
He was the one
I know it I feel it
But why am I so confused
I don't know how he feels
He seems so distant
He's here but then he's not
He's creating a wall
A wall between him and I
I don't even know if there is a he and I anymore
I really really love him
I love him so much
I know this for sure
But still there's that problem
That problem of him
Of him loving HER
The her that's not me
I'm hiding
He doesn't know
I won't tell him how I feel
I just want him to know
But then again I really don't
Why is he with me then
Is he using me or did he think
Think that he MIGHT have liked me
But later found he still loved her
And wanted to be with Her
He can be with her
Because I'm through
I'm through with your pretending
Through with all your lying
I'm closing the door
And you can open the other one
The one you've got a key to
And that's the one
The one that leads you to HER
A contest entry
- Options for the Heartbroken by ThatONEweirdChick.
625 points, ended March 9, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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omg. i totally understand how you feel. this line:
But still there's that problem
That problem of him
Of him loving HER
The her that's not me
i love that. because it totally relates to me. great work steph ><
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uumm yeah...
this was a lovely rant! sounds like something i would say...however i didn't feel like it was a poem...i think you should take this one and re-format it a little and it will BECOME and amazing poem!
thank you for entering our contest!
NineTailedFox -
wow this is a really depressing poem. I'm kinda going thru something similar to this but then it's not really but I understand where you're coming from. Sort of like a rant but still pretty good... thanks for entering this into my contest.
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