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sneezing
my hair went one way
I went the other
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A contest entry
- Aaaachooooo Haiku by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended March 11, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol...this was another good one. I am glad this got a mention as well. A pleasure to reread again.
Kelli -
Well let's hope your hair did not intercept that sneeze :O It would be left there with your friend playing catcher :)) These are so cute and very well written. Made my night finding your work here.
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LOL! That was a heck of a sneeze!
Can only imagine what happens when you blow your nose
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Lol...I like the imagery and the use of 'I' and 'My' here. Goodluck!
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wow, this one is not only funny, but also very, very clever ... I can tell you are a great observer ... I can learn from you ...
adopt me as a pet ?
maa
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sneezing
my hair went one way
I went the other
Thank you for entering my contest. This is a very funny haiku. I really like your sense of humor. -
lol this is funny, but yet not! can one ever not be
humorous after the fact...good luck...Moons
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LOL this is to cute i love it great job with this poem good luck with it in pollycheck's contest.
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lol..I can see this happening. Strong imagery here. I think Pollycheck will get a chuckle out of this. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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hahhahahaaaaaaaa...... Thanks! Funny idea for a contest... couldn't resist. LOL
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