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sneezing --
her false teeth
chewed the mirror
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Author notes
Noooo... lol... I do not have the flu. But I can remember sneezing so hard that I thought I'd die... lol
A contest entry
- Aaaachooooo Haiku by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended March 11, 2008, 31 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations teach!!! This was a winner in my eyes as well. I did take second and two honorable mentions, hope you are proud of your (hard working) student.
Kelli -
ROLFMAO!!! Now this I can attest to happening. Once my Grandfather sneezed and his popped out at the dinner table, I was young and didn't realize he had false teeth :)) Now that was a site!
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Hahoho! That is some sneeze.
I hate flu - when I had it I -wished- to die.
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LOLOOLOLLLLLLLLLLLLLl
Laughing really out loud! Must watch my denture
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That's hilarious!
I sure did get a kick out of that image, Don! Well, I'd better head to my next class. It will sure be nice when I can get done with school, and go back to reading and writing poetry on a regular basis. I miss it. Best of luck to you in Pollycheck's contest! You're one of my personal favorite haiku poets, that's for sure.
Don
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LOL..You have a way with words! Excellent imagery. Great wit!
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*rolling on the floor*
this is absolutely hilarious !
and so smart ...
okay, you don't have the flu, but what about the false teeth ?
maa
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sneezing
my false teeth
hit the mirror
Thank you for entering my contest. This is very funny. You did give me a very good chuckle. -
lol, well I must say this is a winner in my eyes! you are a nut!
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You are a hoot. I did more coughing during this flu. It was worse than anything I had in my life...I sneeze with my mouth closed, so if you sneezed like me, your teeth would have went through your nose...lol Another great haiku. Good luck.
Kelli
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LOLLLLL... I just had to play too. Funny contest. Thanks for laughing along with me.
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