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[ Keep me, ]

Keep me,
hold me.
Let me know you're there.
I can't do this,
not on my own.

I've been beaten,
and broken,
and left in my agony to die
by friends,
by lovers.

Lift me out of this misery.

Author notes

Well - this is an odd thing I wrote. It's a spur-of-the-moment poem. It's about my faith in God, and how I've pretty much lost my faith in humanity. I'm getting it back, though. Slowly.

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  • ThePerfectEnd
    March 5, 2008

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    Good poem... Tho, as criticizing as I am, Id say that I got confused until I actually read the notes section