I am at one with myself,
Tho, I am a devil within,
I am at one with myself,
Tho, I have no friend.
I constantly take what I like
and give nothing in return
I constantly give what I like
and take what I want if it burns
I'll wait and watch you silently
as a wolf stalks its prey
I'll catch you so quietly
you won't know what to say
I'll save the best for last
for your eyeballs I want you to see
Everything I want of you
The fear breeding inside of you not me
First I'll devour your tongue so that
you cannot speak to me
Then I shall devour your eyelids so
you are forced to see
Tied down you are
yet you still wiggle and squirm
It does you no good
Sweat glistens my little worm
Oh how I'll enjoy you
but our time now must end
I'll see you later though
My new best friend.
A contest entry
- Come and Play with the Cannibalistic Goths by VoltaicHypnosis.
700 points, ended March 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Lost. Love To Hate; Hate To Love Poems by pillowjoe.
400 points, ended March 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - my lovely ap family! by Immortal Obscurity.
875 points, ended October 7, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good writing as poetry
Not my thing, really; but the way you wrote it, this is effective.
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Ooh, creepy! Very deserving of that shiny gold trophy you have there... I almost don't know if I want to let you into the family now
You'll eat everyone in their sleep!
I especially loved this bit:
"Tied down you are
yet you still wiggle and squirm
It does you no good
Sweat glistens, my little worm."
Don't know why... I guess I just have an attachment to the creepy poems
Well done, and thanks for entering!
Laura, aka Immortal
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This is eerie (in a good way). This is great. I love morbidness.
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WOW
fREAKY dEAKY!!
This is a powerful and dark write full of intence anticipation as to were it leads.
Very creative and well worth the Gold. Great write!
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Very powerful it is amazing and one of the best I've read so far good job
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Different...interesting...at least I can say from my perspective, it kept me interested to read it all the way through. But I must say also, your poems always do. I know I don't always comment, my life is basically shit right now. Yesterday I let my son go live w/his dad on a trial basis. It was so, so hard to let him go. I just hope he'll be OK. I know what an abusive asshole his dad is, having put up with 4yrs of being beaten by him, and him molesting my daughter the entire time. I knew nothing about what my ex did to my daughter until two years after the divorce and she felt safe enough to tell. My ex is not my daughters' bio dad.
Anywho, I hope all is well w/you, IDK if I'm making any sense at all as I didn't sleep at all last night.
Take care my poet friend.
~Monica
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