Soft, is the wind floating feathered dreams,
twirling into billows of pale shades of blue
guarded by mountains with cool pebbled streams,
dance over memories of a time spent with you
elation of nature holds heart in warmth’s beams,
nobility of love, reflecting from view
Author notes
Form: Harrisham Rhyme
Rhyming scheme : ababab.
painting: http://www.edterpening.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2006/09/1406-Landscape-Rocky-Mountain-Stream-MED.jpg
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A contest entry
- Harrisham Rhyme by Harrisham Minhas.
425 points, ended March 10, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful visuals in this. Congratulations on the gold. WEll done. ~Pamela
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Hey Linda!
You have presented splendid imagery of nature in this poem.
Its very soothing and warm.
Beautifully expressed.
Thanks for your entry.
Harrisham Minhas
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Hi Harrisham, Just had to give your wonderful form a whirl!!I am so very glad to hear you enjoyed it and thought it to be beautifully expressed!
Thank you for the lovely comment
and thank you for offering a new challenge to my writing Best wishes to you in the judging of your contest!
Linda
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Thanks my friend.
Glad that you enjoyed the form.
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Woah! This was amazingly beautiful. So vivid and the picture only helped enhance the view. I felt a peace of mind while reading this... Beautiful.
-Josh
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Thank you so very much Josh for the very beautiful commment! This is a new form for me, one I found intriguing and lots of fun to write!! I appreciate hearing you enjoyed it so!!
Hope you are well my friend
Linda
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