Insatiable my hunger for the finest of all reds
To silence every beauty that is lonely, and some wed
Beneath her silken sheets I creep, making nothing of a sound
A blade to enter softly inside her back, a death profound
My dear, I do insist that you let me lay you here
Atop a gurney stained by blood of brides whom have not a breath to give
Another victim to my name, I add, by killing you
Vanquishing the purest of life, I am forever true
Follow me inside my mind, I'll show you many things
How to cook sweet entrails, how to make two eyes forever gleam
I'll sift throughout your insides, and study anatomy
Forever begins never as your nectar flows on me
My darling, cold and blue, I will never let you go
For as long as I've been doing this I've never had a love
So dead, so gorgeous bathed in red
I'll use your every bone
I'll hack and chew
And swallow whole the bits I do enjoy
Though, the rest of you, blonde beauty,
I will indeed destroy
The thrust of my erection inside your fetid hull
Will act out captivation as I clean your hollowed skull
Worshipped are you now, in death, more than most will ever know
For when in death you realize, you will reap what you have sown.
A contest entry
- Serial Killers by Tattboyspet.
425 points, ended March 6, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Great poem, the flow is awesome and the rhyme nicely subtle. Delightfully dark and gruesomely gory. Produced some fantastic imagery as I read. Very well penned indeed, best of luck in the contest
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and what, pray do tell, would people call you? Please put it in your AN
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This poem flows very easily, has a medelic flow to it. I love the part that goes "So dead so gorgeouse bathed in red, i'll use every bone." Though it is a little creepy, I love how you showed much emotion and love for the girl. XP
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wow babe! This is some intense shit! lol It is awesome nontheless. I love your work! lol Keep it coming!
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interesting use of free verse alternating in stanza's with full rhyme in others. It stalls the reader at certain points to make them feel and visualize the painting the voice gives.
good luck
wsd
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