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We'll jump
You'll burn
I'll drown

I wanted to melt until
You wanted to go up in flames

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    This is short and to the point. I am guessing it is a love poem. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • fairytalelovestory
    March 5, 2008
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    very good

    this was short and yet it conveyed so many emotions good job and good luck.

  • FallOutBoyluvr01
    February 28, 2008
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    interesting

    although i do not like short poems i like this one. It lets your imagination wander


  • Shahrazad
    February 27, 2008

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    really short and abstract- theres a lot said in a few words... really makes me want to hold a short poetry contest next time. Good job! thanks for entering this!