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Cerulean stream


Silence - in rhythms of azure hues
serenade dulcet symphonies;
Magical touch, of softening mists
adorn, the turquoise depths.

Silvery wraps, of ivory froth
dance in delirious tones,
weaving the spells of capturing tint
conjured, in acrylic drops.

Nocturnal skies paint lacteal stars,
reflecting indigo brooks;
Teal river flows, with alluring grace,
tracing her mystical paths.


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Picture prompt: Picture by poppa

sunflowerpoet

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  • iamthebeatles
    January 29

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    This is wonderful. So lush, colorful and inspiring. I love how descriptive this is and how well it words and flows together. All together these words combine to make a stunning artistic piece of work. Bravo!!

    cassie


  • Luminescence
    March 17, 2008

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    Shancy was your judge for the contest… Because of the abundance of entries... we are having trouble getting two scores for each poem...I would just like to thank you anyway for entering and participating in our contest and good luck,
    ~luminescence


  • Shancy Fayre
    March 16, 2008

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    I'm going to be quick commenting due to the abundance of entries. Here is your score: Title: 9 Diction: 9 Syntax: 9 Wowness factor: 9. Total: 36. Thank you for entering and participating. Good luck. Shancy.


  • poppa
    February 28, 2008

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    This is a beuatiful poem......love the rich and deep imagery that is prevalent within this.....Thank you for entering my compettion....


    • sunflowerpoet
      February 28, 2008
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      Thanks so much for the kind comments and applause... Glad that you enjoyed it..

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