Silence - in rhythms of azure hues
serenade dulcet symphonies;
Magical touch, of softening mists
adorn, the turquoise depths.
Silvery wraps, of ivory froth
dance in delirious tones,
weaving the spells of capturing tint
conjured, in acrylic drops.
Nocturnal skies paint lacteal stars,
reflecting indigo brooks;
Teal river flows, with alluring grace,
tracing her mystical paths.
Author notes
Picture prompt: Picture by poppa
sunflowerpoet
A contest entry
- Poppa's First Contest - Picture Prompt by poppa.
1750 points, ended March 5, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "celebrate, celebrate, dance to the music!" round 1 of 4 by iamthebeatles.
650 points, ended February 5, 44 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is wonderful. So lush, colorful and inspiring. I love how descriptive this is and how well it words and flows together. All together these words combine to make a stunning artistic piece of work. Bravo!!

cassie

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Shancy was your judge for the contest… Because of the abundance of entries... we are having trouble getting two scores for each poem...I would just like to thank you anyway for entering and participating in our contest and good luck,
~luminescence
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I'm going to be quick commenting due to the abundance of entries. Here is your score: Title: 9 Diction: 9 Syntax: 9 Wowness factor: 9. Total: 36. Thank you for entering and participating. Good luck. Shancy.
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This is a beuatiful poem......love the rich and deep imagery that is prevalent within this.....Thank you for entering my compettion....


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Thanks so much for the kind comments and applause...
Glad that you enjoyed it..
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