I was not like this in these days
The doctor says,
Sorrows won't fade
Since sins I made.
The events of my life go worst
I have ever thirst,
To love someone
Live for someone.
My bad habits lead me to this stage
Though I have age,
Live only few days
You Sinner, AIDS says.
Author notes
This poem is written in the form of poetry called,"Minute Poetry". The AIDS patient is the most disappointed person in the World, since he is the one who knows his deadline.
A contest entry
- Quickie. by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended February 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Sis, this was deep and I love how your words seemed to tell a story. Aids is a terrible disease and anyone who has to live through it to me is a courageous person because if were me, I just couldn't do it. I feel the pain of the patient here along with the pain of the family members...although you don't mention them.
Great piece...I love you always!
& 
Oh yea, good luck in the contest!
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