journey begun
tenderness
flows white mirages
of loneliness
carved into stone
devoured
like torrents defacing beauty
mutilation
spoils composure
but Love’s Peace
transforms
and fear and guilt
and hatred
are wiped
as Water cleanses
like stream of soft touch
on feel of dry parch
patient kindness
humble offering
joyous delight
enfold
into manifestations
of hope
and trust
and knowing
His Love maketh us whole …
In a list
A contest entry
- It keeps no record of wrongs... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended March 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good contrast of word describing the pain is a world void of love and how love brings healing and hope to that pain.
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Lovely Words
This was beautiful my friend. Love is many things and when it is patient and it can wait and endure many things. A lovely poem with stunning imagery. Your words are beautiful. Bless you. Take care, Sandy
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"but Love’s Peace
transforms"
this is beautiful, Frans. I loved the depth of spirituality here - it's both divine and earthy - just as love is. and now you have me thinking of one of my favourite songs "Love changes everything"...this is exactly what you've achieved here through your words - that sense of wholeness.
~ Nicolette
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Your words are so true my friend. He and He alone can make us whole. Even when we lose our way He is there to guide us with a tap on the shoulder. Thank you for sharing. This really uplifted me on a sad day. Bless you. Sandy
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Beautiful
What a beautiful poem here. I just loved this one. The title is perfect Loves Patience. Then the whole form and writing of this poem is just brilliant really. Thank you for sharing with me.
as Water cleanses
like stream of soft touch
on feel of dry parch
Just loved this part!!
Wishing you many blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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I loved this,
it's reads devinley of hope and love. You have taken the reader on a spiritual walk through the rights and wrongs of life. i enjoyed this Frans and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Slán
Dolores xx
xx
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Simply the wondrous secret of Love ...
Divine ... "it keeps no record of the wrongs" ... Within His Love, all woundedness and negative outcomes are turned around ... And there will be Light and Life, and everflowing Living Water.
Good luck in the contest, Poet. A deep and spiritually healing poem of upliftment, hope and faith.
Love
Myra
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