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amputate me
at the neck -
body's fine, head's gone to heck

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  • dustookie2
    August 22, 2008

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    Hood Winked!!

    Oh yes am smiling here thinking how true. You have captured it in three lines. I just had to come in and read....as our winter is coming to an end and hopefully the flu season as well.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    March 14, 2008
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    Love it! Very funny!


  • DrunkenRam
    March 4, 2008

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    he he, I like this one, I can relate to that only in reverse.
    Nice achoo Haiku, I have only two Haiku's just not as talented as you at them.


  • Pollycheck
    February 27, 2008

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    amputate me
    at the neck -
    body's fine, head's gone to heck

    Thank you for entering my contest. I have felt this way many times. Thanks for the chuckle.